The Writer's Journey with Laura Davis Podcast
PODCAST SHOW NOTES Episode Title: They Made Me Part of History: A Final Deleted Scene from the Cutting Room Floor Episode Description: Some stories are too good to lose—even when they have to go. In this special episode, acclaimed author and writing teacher Laura Davis shares the final deleted scene from her award-winning memoir, The Burning Light of Two Stars. It's a piece she fought to keep, shaped with care, and ultimately had to release. What remains is a story that illuminates not just a family, but an era—and the quiet, ordinary moments that place us inside the extraordinary. What Laura Covers in This Episode: The painful editorial decisions behind cutting 30,000 words from a completed memoir draft Why even a perfectly written scene must go if it doesn't serve the core throughline The relationship between ruthless cutting and creating a "page-turner with real momentum" A vivid personal narrative set against two watershed moments in American history How childhood memory, sensory detail, and family values intersect in memoir The role of parents in shaping a child's moral imagination and sense of witness Episode Highlights: The Story Behind the Story — Laura sets the scene for this deleted piece, explaining why she wrote it, what it was meant to do, and why, in the end, it had to go. A Classroom Moment That Stops Time — Something happens in an ordinary second-grade classroom that no child expects—and the world is suddenly, irreversibly different. A Mother on the Couch — Laura describes coming home to find her mother doing something she never did, and what they watched together that afternoon that neither of them would ever forget. A Family Decision Made Over Dinner — Around a table with a favorite childhood meal, Laura's parents make an announcement that will take the whole family somewhere none of them have ever been. A Sea of People — Three months before the classroom scene, Laura's family was already somewhere remarkable—part of something hundreds of thousands of people had traveled to join. Feet in the Water, a Voice in the Air — An eight-year-old girl, tired and hot at the end of a long summer day, hears words that will echo for the rest of her life. The Craft Lesson Underneath — Laura reflects on what this scene taught her about memoir structure, throughline, and the courage required to cut what you love most. An Invitation to the Memoir It Came From — Laura shares reader praise for The Burning Light of Two Stars and invites listeners into the larger story this scene was written to serve. About Host Laura Davis: Laura Davis is an acclaimed author and writing teacher with more than 35 years of experience helping writers find and tell their most important stories. She is the author of seven books, including her award-winning memoir The Burning Light of Two Stars (BookLife Prize Winner, 2021) and the groundbreaking co-authored work The Courage to Heal. Laura leads weekly writing classes on Zoom, hosts writing retreats including Flourishing as We Age and the Creative Camino pilgrimage. She reaches writers around the world through The Writer's Journey podcast and her Midweek Pause for Peace series. Her teaching is known for being both rigorous and deeply humane—challenging writers to go further than they thought possible while honoring the courage it takes to tell the truth. Key Takeaways from This Episode: Your throughline is everything. Every scene in a memoir—no matter how beautifully written—must serve the central spine of the story. If it doesn't, it has to go, regardless of how much you love it. Cutting is a creative act. Removing 30,000 words from a finished draft isn't failure—it's the work. Momentum is built not just by what you include, but by what you're willing to release. Sensory specificity is the engine of memory. The details that seem too small to matter—the wool skirt, the crystal doorknob, the taste of an Oreo—are often what make a scene unforgettable. Childhood scenes can carry enormous moral weight. The values a child absorbs, and the moments a family chooses to witness together, become part of that child's lifelong understanding of what matters. Even deleted work has value. A scene cut from a memoir isn't wasted—it deepens the writer's understanding of the story, and it may find its audience in an entirely different form. Episode Call-to-Action: For Writers: Take a close look at your own manuscript. Is there a scene you love—one you've been holding onto—that may not be serving your throughline? Laura's experience cutting this piece is an invitation to ask the hard question: What does my story actually need? For Readers: If this deleted scene moved you, imagine what didn't get cut. Pick up a copy of The Burning Light of Two Stars and discover the memoir this scene was written to support. If you haven't yet read The Burning Light of Two Stars — the memoir these deleted scenes were written for — now is the time. Readers describe it as impossible to put down, a book that sends them straight into thinking about their own mothers, their own estrangements, their own unfinished reckonings. You can purchase the print edition and audiobook here: 👉 lauradavis.net/the-burning-light-of-two-stars [https://lauradavis.net/the-burning-light-of-two-stars/] Subscribe: Don't miss future deleted scenes, craft essays, and writing insights. Subscribe to Laura's Substack at laurasaridavis.substack.com [http://laurasaridavis.substack.com] to receive every new post directly in your inbox. Deleted Scenes in This Series: The Summer I Dropped Acid with My Father: https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/p/5d90f2b6-2d68-4d9f-a120-cad131f6e3f2 [https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/p/5d90f2b6-2d68-4d9f-a120-cad131f6e3f2] I Could Still Let Her Comfort Me Then: https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/p/d72ed72f-70c3-4489-8def-1cf5ad6d5a86 [https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/p/d72ed72f-70c3-4489-8def-1cf5ad6d5a86] They Made Me Part of History: https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/p/de5c307d-9165-43e9-a7d2-50b7cf957362 [https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/p/de5c307d-9165-43e9-a7d2-50b7cf957362] Connect with Laura Davis: 🌐 Website: lauradavis.net [http://lauradavis.net] ✉️ Substack: laurasaridavis.substack.com [http://laurasaridavis.substack.com] 🎙️ Podcast: The Writer's Journey with Laura Davis 📚 Writing Classes & Retreats: Available online and internationally — visit her website to learn more The Writer's Journey with Laura Davis is a reader-supported publication. To receive new posts and support her work, consider becoming a free or paid subscriber. You'll receive regular posts like these, as well as beautifully curated poems and nature photos, essays on life and the craft of writing, and more. You can subscribe here: https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/ [https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/] Learn about Laura's writing classes, books, workshops, and international retreats at: https://lauradavis.net/ [https://lauradavis.net/] This is a public episode. If you'd like to discuss this with other subscribers or get access to bonus episodes, visit laurasaridavis.substack.com/subscribe [https://laurasaridavis.substack.com/subscribe?utm_medium=podcast&utm_campaign=CTA_2]
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