Writing Better Fiction: POV, Pacing & Why Readers Stop Believing Your Story

Writing Better Fiction: POV, Pacing & Why Readers Stop Believing Your Story

Use code WOW10 for 10% off the Brick! https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10 [https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10] Also, we'd love to critique your pages! We review genres of all kinds. Please send 1-10 pages and a synopsis of what the chapter/read is about to mailto:witchesofworkshop@gmail.com [witchesofworkshop@gmail.com] We start with some everyday chaos (a slightly unhinged morning and fashion decisions that may or may not have made sense in the moment), then somehow end up talking about Saved by the Bell, reading burnout, and what it feels like to constantly try to keep up with books everyone says you “should” be reading. From there, we shift into writing craft—specifically a short story critique where we break down what actually makes fiction work on the page. We get into POV, tension, pacing, word economy, narrative clarity, and how stories either hold a reader or slowly lose them without you noticing. A big part of the conversation is about why stories lose momentum and what creates that feeling of “I stopped believing this,” even if you can’t always explain why. We also talk about satire and intent, especially how hard it is to write humor or critique something well when you don’t fully understand it—and why familiarity with your subject can make or break the work. Overall, this episode is really about the gap between intention and execution in storytelling: what we think we’re writing versus what a reader actually experiences. If you’re into writing fiction, storytelling craft, short story analysis, POV, tension, or reader immersion, this one goes deep into the messy, practical side of how stories actually hold together.

What No One Tells You About Writing Romance, Book-to-Movie Deals & Being a Bestseller w Kayla Olson

Use code WOW10 for 10% off the Brick! https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10 [https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10] Also, we'd love to critique your pages! We review genres of all kinds. Please send 1-10 pages and a synopsis of what the chapter/read is about to witchesofworkshop@gmail.com [witchesofworkshop@gmail.com] USA Today bestselling romance author Kayla Olson joins us to talk about the realities of building a writing career, why writing romance is harder than many writers think, and what it takes to stay optimistic through the ups and downs of publishing. In this episode, we discuss the research behind romance novels, common misconceptions about writing romance, and why the genre requires far more craft and planning than it often gets credit for. Kayla also shares her journey from working at Starbucks to becoming a bestselling author, the importance of finding the right writing community, and the green flags and red flags every writer should watch for in critique groups. We also dive into one of the most exciting moments in an author's career: what happens when a celebrity wants to adapt your book for film or television. Kayla pulls back the curtain on book-to-screen adaptations, publishing opportunities, and navigating the business side of being an author. Whether you're an aspiring author, querying writer, romance writer, or traditionally published author, this conversation is packed with writing advice, publishing insights, and encouragement for anyone pursuing a long-term writing career. Topics include: • Writing romance and romance novel research • Publishing industry realities • Critique groups and writing communities • Book-to-film and book-to-TV adaptations • Author mindset and staying motivated • Building a sustainable writing career • Querying, publishing, and perseverance • Becoming a USA Today bestselling author If you're looking for writing advice, publishing tips, author interviews, and behind-the-scenes insights into the writing life, this episode is for you.

Why Getting Published Doesn't Fix Your Writing Career | YA Fantasy Author Dana Swift

Use code WOW10 for 10% off the Brick! https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10 [https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10] Also, we'd love to critique your pages! We review genres of all kinds. Please send 1-10 pages and a synopsis of what the chapter/read is about to witchesofworkshop@gmail.com [witchesofworkshop@gmail.com]. In this episode, we sit down with YA Fantasy Author Dana Swift to talk about what it really takes to build a writing career beyond the page. Dana shares her experience publishing her debut novel during the pandemic and how that unexpected timing shaped her path as an author. We dig into the lessons she learned about author marketing, building a writing platform and finding readers in a crowded publishing landscape, along with the reality of what it means to promote your work as a debut author. Dana also breaks down how she developed a stronger understanding of story structure and plot, and why those craft foundations became essential to her growth as a writer. Beyond craft and publishing, we explore the importance of writing community, critique partners and attending writing conferences, and how connecting with other writers can accelerate learning, career opportunities and long-term success. Whether you’re working on your first novel or trying to grow your author career, this conversation offers insight into publishing a debut, improving your storytelling and navigating the modern writing industry. Tune in for a candid look at the intersection of writing craft, publishing and the often-overlooked community behind successful authors.

Why Plotting Vs. Pantsing DOESN'T MATTER: Our In-Progress Writing Processes

Use code WOW10 for 10% off the Brick! https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10 [https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10] Also, we'd love to critique your pages! We review genres of all kinds. Please send 1-10 pages and a synopsis of what the chapter/read is about to witchesofworkshop@gmail.com. In this episode, we're sharing our current writing processes, the writing advice we've embraced (and ignored), and why what works for one author might not work for another. We kick things off with life updates, including new hobbies, fitness adventures, and the latest progress on our writing projects. Then we dive into the craft of writing: word count goals, plotting vs. pantsing, finding inspiration, and the ongoing process of refining a writing routine that actually works. We also discuss the books we've loved—and abandoned—our thoughts on DNFing books, the writing tools we use to stay organized, and how reading influences everything from our stories to our dream character casts. Whether you're a plotter, a pantser, or somewhere in between, this episode is packed with insights on writing processes, productivity, creativity, and building habits that support your writing life.

Do Authors Need to be Influencers Now? | Querying, Going Viral & Burnout ft. Kate Khavari

In this episode, we’re joined by Kate Khavari to talk about the realities of building an author career in today’s publishing industry. From going viral on Threads to navigating burnout, querying with a sales record, and balancing an online presence with actually writing books, Kate shares an honest look at what being an author really feels like in 2026. We discuss Kate’s journey from science teacher to bestselling historical mystery author, why writing communities and group chats matter more than ever, and how conferences like the Historical Novel Society conference can change your career. We also get into the pressure modern authors face online, the importance of social media for discoverability and book sales, and why so many writers are feeling burned out right now. Whether you’re querying, publishing, marketing your books online, or trying to recover your creativity after burnout, this episode is packed with candid publishing conversations, author advice, and behind-the-scenes insights into the modern writing life. Topics discussed: * Going viral on Threads as an author * Querying in today’s publishing industry * Author burnout and taking creative breaks * Building a writing community online * Historical mystery writing and the appeal of the 1920s * The pressure of social media for authors * Writing conferences and networking * Balancing productivity, creativity, and rest * Transitioning from teaching to publishing For 10% off Brick, use our code: https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10 [https://www.getbrick.com/WOW10] To have your pages critiqued on the podcast, just email 1-10 pages and a synopsis of the read to witchesofworkshop@gmail.com [witchesofworkshop@gmail.com].