Audio feedback on a final essay of mixed quality

Audio feedback to rescue a poor draft that is off target

This episode illustrates using audio feedback to explain the shortcomings in a draft assignment and offer advice on how to rectify the situation.

Audio feedback with constructive comments on an improvable draft

This episode is audio feedback on a good draft that can be improved

Audio feedback on a weak post-graduate assignment

This episode is audio feedback on a poor submission.  This example illustrates how voice intonation contributes to conveying the marker’s impression of the submission.  It is important to mention that it is a post-graduate submission. It's from an MBA student and my expectations around the standard of work have influenced my feedback.

Audio feedback on a draft and answering student questions

This episode is audio feedback on a draft assignment hence the feedback focuses on how to improve the assignment. This example also illustrates how audio feedback enables me to spend time answering questions the student has appended to their draft.

Audio feedback on a final essay of mixed quality

This episode is an example of audio feedback on a finished essay that was submitted for marking.  It is an essay with some stronger and weaker components.