Jon Winslow

Jack Kauffman

Bill & Karl discuss an email cold query Bill had recently received from a writer he doesn't know, and they work with Jack on his brand, speaking new idea for a feature film script.

Suzy Stein & Fernando Perez

Karl & Bill talk about how to format text conversations in scripts, and help Suzy & Fernando with the logline and structure for their rewrite of their rom-com feature.

Doug Spaltro

Bill & Karl talk about the "Big 'O'!" They also help Doug as he contemplates a rewrite for his feature script based on personal experience.

Jeremy Wadzinski

Karl & Bill introduce the new segment title and also talk about when new writers base their main characters too close to themselves. Then they help Jeremy as he seeks to adapt his feature story into a TV series.

Jon Winslow

Bill and Karl tackle the problem of "two main characters," and help Jon with his action feature, BAD BAYOU.